From 46bc04f69f40b4ec54784aede4f5937e38bfbec6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Emma <emma@waffle.coffee>
Date: Sat, 5 Jun 2021 23:34:43 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Adjust quite a bit of wording (#252)

* Adjust quite a bit of wording
Also converts many title case things to sentence case (fixes #238)

* Change advised to recommended

* Oops, I missed a page

* That page too

* Missed a spot
---
 components/layout/MFooter.vue            |  2 +-
 pages/dashboard.vue                      |  4 +-
 pages/dashboard/follows.vue              |  2 +-
 pages/dashboard/misc/revoke-token.vue    | 10 ++-
 pages/dashboard/notifications.vue        |  2 +-
 pages/dashboard/privacy.vue              |  8 +-
 pages/dashboard/projects.vue             |  2 +-
 pages/dashboard/settings.vue             | 42 ++++++-----
 pages/index.vue                          |  6 +-
 pages/mod/_id/edit.vue                   | 52 ++++++++-----
 pages/mod/_id/newversion.vue             | 30 ++++----
 pages/mod/_id/settings.vue               | 44 +++++------
 pages/mod/_id/version/_version/edit.vue  | 28 +++----
 pages/mod/_id/version/_version/index.vue | 12 +--
 pages/mod/create.vue                     | 94 +++++++++++++-----------
 pages/mods.vue                           |  8 +-
 pages/report/create.vue                  | 10 +--
 privacy-toggles.js                       | 15 ++--
 18 files changed, 196 insertions(+), 175 deletions(-)

diff --git a/components/layout/MFooter.vue b/components/layout/MFooter.vue
index 786a5db07..167a6e169 100644
--- a/components/layout/MFooter.vue
+++ b/components/layout/MFooter.vue
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
     </ul>
     <ul>
       <li>
-        <nuxt-link to="/dashboard/privacy">Set privacy preferences</nuxt-link>
+        <nuxt-link to="/dashboard/privacy">Change privacy settings</nuxt-link>
       </li>
     </ul>
     <span> © Guavy LLC </span><br />
diff --git a/pages/dashboard.vue b/pages/dashboard.vue
index eb9276a7b..562ab599e 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard.vue
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
           </nuxt-link>
           <nuxt-link :to="'/dashboard/privacy'" class="tab last">
             <ShieldIcon />
-            Privacy Settings
+            Privacy settings
           </nuxt-link>
         </div>
         <div v-else class="card page-nav">
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
           </a>
           <nuxt-link :to="'/dashboard/privacy'" class="tab last">
             <SettingsIcon />
-            Privacy Settings
+            Privacy settings
           </nuxt-link>
         </div>
         <m-footer class="footer" hide-small />
diff --git a/pages/dashboard/follows.vue b/pages/dashboard/follows.vue
index 799fe18d4..a37c170b4 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard/follows.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard/follows.vue
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ export default {
     },
   },
   head: {
-    title: 'Followed mods - Modrinth',
+    title: 'Followed Mods - Modrinth',
   },
 }
 </script>
diff --git a/pages/dashboard/misc/revoke-token.vue b/pages/dashboard/misc/revoke-token.vue
index ba0e3c1b1..432a82b0e 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard/misc/revoke-token.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard/misc/revoke-token.vue
@@ -6,12 +6,12 @@
     <section class="essentials pad-maker">
       <p>
         Revoking your Modrinth token can have unintended consequences. Please be
-        wary, the following could break:
+        aware that the following could break:
       </p>
       <ul>
         <li>Any application that uses your token to access the API.</li>
         <li>
-          Gradle - if Minotaur is given a incorrect token, your gradle builds
+          Gradle - if Minotaur is given a incorrect token, your Gradle builds
           could fail.
         </li>
         <li>
@@ -35,10 +35,12 @@
           header.
         </li>
       </ol>
-      <p>Once you have completed the steps, press the continue button below.</p>
+      <p>
+        Once you have completed those steps, press the continue button below.
+      </p>
       <p>
         <strong>
-          This will log you out of Modrinth, however when you log back in your
+          This will log you out of Modrinth, however, when you log back in, your
           token will be regenerated.
         </strong>
       </p>
diff --git a/pages/dashboard/notifications.vue b/pages/dashboard/notifications.vue
index e31e7a435..4cc5dfe92 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard/notifications.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard/notifications.vue
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
diff --git a/pages/dashboard/privacy.vue b/pages/dashboard/privacy.vue
index c9e983721..efa11b026 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard/privacy.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard/privacy.vue
@@ -2,12 +2,12 @@
 <template>
   <div class="popup card">
     <div class="consent-container">
-      <div class="h1">Tweak your privacy settings</div>
+      <div class="h1">Privacy settings</div>
       <div>
         Modrinth relies on different providers and in-house tools to allow us to
-        provide custom-tailored experiences, and personalized advertising. You
-        can at any moment change your privacy settings by going to the setting
-        page, or at the footer of any page.
+        provide custom-tailored experiences and personalized advertising. You
+        can change your privacy settings at any time by going to this settings
+        page, via the dashboard or via the footer of any page.
       </div>
       <br class="divider" />
       <div class="toggles">
diff --git a/pages/dashboard/projects.vue b/pages/dashboard/projects.vue
index 2e759ff05..8e219f546 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard/projects.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard/projects.vue
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ export default {
     }
   },
   head: {
-    title: 'My mods - Modrinth',
+    title: 'My Mods - Modrinth',
   },
 }
 </script>
diff --git a/pages/dashboard/settings.vue b/pages/dashboard/settings.vue
index 718362064..70fdec47c 100644
--- a/pages/dashboard/settings.vue
+++ b/pages/dashboard/settings.vue
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
       title="Are you sure you want to delete your account?"
       description="If you proceed, your user and all attached data will be removed from our
         servers. This cannot be reversed, so be careful!"
-      proceed-label="Delete Account"
+      proceed-label="Delete account"
       :confirmation-text="username"
       :has-to-type="true"
       @proceed="deleteAccount"
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@
       <h3>Username</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
-          The username used on the Modrinth site to identify yourself. This must
-          be unique.
+          The username used on Modrinth to identify yourself. This must be
+          unique.
         </span>
         <input
           v-model="username"
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
       <label>
         <span>
           The email for your account. This is private information which is not
-          displayed in any API routes or your profile. It is also optional.
+          exposed in any API routes or on your profile. It is also optional.
         </span>
         <input v-model="email" type="email" placeholder="Enter your email" />
       </label>
@@ -56,14 +56,15 @@
       <h3>Theme</h3>
       <label>
         <span
-          >Change the global site theme of Modrinth. You can choose from light
-          mode and dark mode. You can switch it using this button or anywhere by
-          accessing the theme switcher in the navigation bar dropdown.</span
+          >Change the global site theme of Modrinth. You can choose between
+          light mode and dark mode. You can switch it using this button or
+          anywhere by accessing the theme switcher in the navigation bar
+          dropdown.</span
         >
         <input
           type="button"
           class="button pad-rem"
-          value="Change Theme"
+          value="Change theme"
           @click="changeTheme"
         />
       </label>
@@ -72,36 +73,37 @@
       <h3>Authorization token</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
-          Your authorization token can be used with the Modrinth API and for the
-          Minotaur Gradle plugin. However, it must be kept secret!
+          Your authorization token can be used with the Modrinth API, the
+          Minotaur Gradle plugin, and other applications that interact with
+          Modrinth's API. Be sure to keep this secret!
         </span>
         <input
           type="button"
           class="button pad-rem"
-          value="Copy to Clipboard"
+          value="Copy to clipboard"
           @click="copyToken"
         />
       </label>
       <h3>Revoke your token</h3>
       <label>
         <span
-          >Beware, this will log you out of Modrinth, and you will have to login
-          again to access Modrinth with a new token.</span
+          >This will log you out of Modrinth, and you will have to log in again
+          to access Modrinth with a new token.</span
         >
         <input
           type="button"
           class="button"
-          value="Revoke Token"
+          value="Revoke token"
           @click="gotoRevoke"
         />
       </label>
       <h3>Delete your account</h3>
       <label>
         <span
-          >Clicking on this WILL delete your user. Do not click on this unless
-          you want your user deleted. If you delete your user, all attached data
-          will be removed from our servers. This cannot be reversed, so be
-          careful!</span
+          >Clicking on this WILL delete your account. Do not click on this
+          unless you want your account deleted. If you delete your account, all
+          attached data, including projects, will be removed from our servers.
+          This cannot be reversed, so be careful!</span
         >
         <input
           value="Delete Account"
@@ -178,7 +180,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
@@ -197,7 +199,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
diff --git a/pages/index.vue b/pages/index.vue
index 68f38bf2b..9213de156 100644
--- a/pages/index.vue
+++ b/pages/index.vue
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
         <h3>Conveniently modern</h3>
         <h1>A redefined search interface</h1>
         <p>
-          We implemented <span>fast and adaptable</span> search algorithms so
+          We've implemented <span>fast and adaptable</span> search algorithms so
           you don't have to wait, while creating a responsive interface that
           makes sense. Modrinth is full of elegant mod discovery and a platform
           which just works.
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@
         <h3>Easy to implement</h3>
         <h1>Backed by an open source API</h1>
         <p>
-          Modrinth's code is fully open source licensed under AGPL. We've
-          created a high peformant Rust based backend that is
+          Modrinth's code is fully open source, licensed under the GNU AGPL.
+          We've created a high-performance Rust-based backend that is
           <span
             ><a href="https://github.com/modrinth/labrinth/wiki"
               >fully documented</a
diff --git a/pages/mod/_id/edit.vue b/pages/mod/_id/edit.vue
index 48cebc8a8..a025846c2 100644
--- a/pages/mod/_id/edit.vue
+++ b/pages/mod/_id/edit.vue
@@ -30,14 +30,14 @@
       <h3>Name</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
-          Be creative. TechCraft v7 won't be searchable and won't be clicked on
+          Be creative. TechCraft v7 won't be searchable and won't be clicked on.
         </span>
         <input v-model="mod.title" type="text" placeholder="Enter the name" />
       </label>
       <h3>Summary</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
-          Give a quick description to your mod. It will appear in the search
+          Give a quick summary of your mod. This will appear in search.
         </span>
         <input
           v-model="mod.description"
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
       <h3>Categories</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
-          Select up to 3 categories. They will help to find your mod
+          Select up to 3 categories. These will help others find your mod.
         </span>
         <multiselect
           id="categories"
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
       <h3>Vanity URL (slug)</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
-          Set this to something pretty, so URLs to your mod are more readable
+          Set this to something pretty, so your mod's URL can be more readable.
         </span>
         <input
           id="name"
@@ -87,13 +87,13 @@
           <file-input
             accept="image/png,image/jpeg,image/gif,image/webp"
             class="choose-image"
-            prompt="Choose image or drag it here"
+            prompt="Choose an image or drag it here"
             @change="showPreviewImage"
           />
           <ul class="row-grow-1">
             <li>Must be a square</li>
             <li>Minimum size is 100x100</li>
-            <li>Acceptable formats are PNG, JPEG, GIF and WEBP</li>
+            <li>Acceptable formats are PNG, JPEG, GIF, and WEBP</li>
           </ul>
           <button
             class="transparent-button"
@@ -122,9 +122,9 @@
       <h3>Supported environments</h3>
       <div class="columns">
         <span>
-          Let others know if your mod is for clients, servers or universal. For
-          example, IC2 will be required + required, while OptiFine will be
-          required + no functionality
+          Let others know if your mod is for clients, servers, or both. For
+          example, Lithium would be optional for both sides, whereas Sodium
+          would be required on the client and unsupported on the server.
         </span>
         <div class="labeled-control">
           <h3>Client</h3>
@@ -156,14 +156,14 @@
       <h3>
         <label
           for="body"
-          title="You can type the of the long form of your description here."
+          title="You can type an extended description of your mod here."
         >
           Description
         </label>
       </h3>
       <span>
-        You can type the of the long form of your description here. This editor
-        supports markdown. You can find the syntax
+        You can type an extended description of your mod here. This editor
+        supports Markdown. Its syntax can be found
         <a
           href="https://guides.github.com/features/mastering-markdown/"
           target="_blank"
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@
           placeholder="Enter a valid URL"
         />
       </label>
-      <label title="A page/repository containing the source code">
+      <label title="A page/repository containing the source code for your mod.">
         <span>Source code</span>
         <input
           v-model="mod.source_url"
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
           placeholder="Enter a valid URL"
         />
       </label>
-      <label title="An inivitation link to your Discord server.">
+      <label title="An invitation link to your Discord server.">
         <span>Discord invite</span>
         <input
           v-model="mod.discord_url"
@@ -225,9 +225,18 @@
       </div>
       <label>
         <span>
-          It is really important to choose a proper license for your mod. You
-          may choose one from our list or provide a URL to your own license. URL
-          field will be filled automatically for provided licenses
+          It is very important to choose a proper license for your mod. You may
+          choose one from our list or provide a URL to a custom license.
+          <br />
+          Confused? See our
+          <a
+            href="https://blog.modrinth.com/licensing-guide/"
+            target="_blank"
+            rel="noopener noreferrer"
+          >
+            licensing guide</a
+          >
+          for more information.
         </span>
         <div class="input-group">
           <Multiselect
@@ -244,6 +253,7 @@
         </div>
       </label>
     </section>
+    <!--
     <section class="donations">
       <div class="title">
         <h3>Donation links</h3>
@@ -293,6 +303,7 @@
         <hr />
       </div>
     </section>
+    -->
   </div>
 </template>
 
@@ -459,7 +470,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
@@ -669,4 +680,9 @@ section.donations {
 .choose-image {
   cursor: pointer;
 }
+
+a {
+  text-decoration: underline;
+  color: var(--color-link);
+}
 </style>
diff --git a/pages/mod/_id/newversion.vue b/pages/mod/_id/newversion.vue
index a00ffc645..ec9c0161d 100644
--- a/pages/mod/_id/newversion.vue
+++ b/pages/mod/_id/newversion.vue
@@ -14,7 +14,8 @@
         <h3>Name</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            This is what users will see first. Will default to version number
+            This is what users will see first. If not specified, this will
+            default to the version number.
           </span>
           <input
             v-model="createdVersion.version_title"
@@ -25,7 +26,7 @@
         <h3>Number</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            That's how your version will appear in mod lists and in URLs
+            This is how your version will appear in mod lists and URLs.
           </span>
           <input
             v-model="createdVersion.version_number"
@@ -36,8 +37,8 @@
         <h3>Channel</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            It is important to notify players and pack makers if the version is
-            stable
+            It is important to notify players and modpack makers whether the
+            version is stable or if it's still in development.
           </span>
           <multiselect
             v-model="createdVersion.release_channel"
@@ -49,11 +50,9 @@
             :allow-empty="false"
           />
         </label>
-        <h3>Loaders</h3>
+        <h3>Mod loaders</h3>
         <label>
-          <span>
-            Mark all loaders this version works with. It is essential for search
-          </span>
+          <span>Mark all mod loaders this version works with.</span>
           <multiselect
             v-model="createdVersion.loaders"
             :options="selectableLoaders"
@@ -69,12 +68,9 @@
             placeholder="Choose loaders..."
           />
         </label>
-        <h3>Game versions</h3>
+        <h3>Minecraft versions</h3>
         <label>
-          <span>
-            Mark all game version this version supports. It is essential for
-            search
-          </span>
+          <span>Mark all Minecraft versions this mod version supports.</span>
           <multiselect
             v-model="createdVersion.game_versions"
             :options="selectableVersions"
@@ -94,7 +90,7 @@
         <label>
           <span>
             You should upload a single JAR file. However, you are allowed to
-            upload multiple
+            upload multiple.
           </span>
           <FileInput
             accept="application/*"
@@ -108,8 +104,8 @@
         <h3>Changelog</h3>
         <span>
           Tell players and modpack makers what's new. It supports the same
-          markdown as description, but it is advisable not to be too creative
-          with it in changelogs
+          Markdown as the description, but it is advised not to be too creative
+          with the changelogs.
         </span>
         <div class="textarea-wrapper">
           <textarea v-model="createdVersion.version_body"></textarea>
@@ -204,7 +200,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
diff --git a/pages/mod/_id/settings.vue b/pages/mod/_id/settings.vue
index 871ef406c..96af37003 100644
--- a/pages/mod/_id/settings.vue
+++ b/pages/mod/_id/settings.vue
@@ -6,31 +6,31 @@
       description="If you proceed, all versions and any attached data will be removed from our servers. This may break other projects, so be careful."
       :has-to-type="true"
       :confirmation-text="mod.title"
-      proceed-label="Delete Mod"
+      proceed-label="Delete mod"
       @proceed="deleteMod"
     />
     <div class="section-header columns">
       <h3 class="column-grow-1">General</h3>
     </div>
     <section>
-      <h3>Edit Mod</h3>
+      <h3>Edit mod</h3>
       <label>
-        <span> This leads you to a page where you can edit your mod. </span>
+        <span>This leads you to a page where you can edit your mod.</span>
         <nuxt-link class="button" to="edit">Edit</nuxt-link>
       </label>
-      <h3>Create Version</h3>
+      <h3>Create version</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
           This leads to a page where you can create a version for your mod.
         </span>
-        <nuxt-link class="button" to="newversion">Create Version</nuxt-link>
+        <nuxt-link class="button" to="newversion">Create version</nuxt-link>
       </label>
-      <h3>Delete Mod</h3>
+      <h3>Delete mod</h3>
       <label>
         <span>
           Clicking on this WILL delete your mod. Do not click on this unless you
           want your mod deleted. If you delete your mod, all versions and any
-          attatched data will be removed from our servers. This may break other
+          attached data will be removed from our servers. This may break other
           projects, so be careful!
         </span>
         <div
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
           :disabled="(currentMember.permissions & DELETE_MOD) !== DELETE_MOD"
           @click="showPopup"
         >
-          Delete Mod
+          Delete mod
         </div>
       </label>
     </section>
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & UPLOAD_VERSION) !== UPLOAD_VERSION
             "
-            label="Upload Version"
+            label="Upload version"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= UPLOAD_VERSION"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & DELETE_VERSION) !== DELETE_VERSION
             "
-            label="Delete Version"
+            label="Delete version"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= DELETE_VERSION"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_DETAILS) !== EDIT_DETAILS
             "
-            label="Edit Details"
+            label="Edit details"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= EDIT_DETAILS"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_BODY) !== EDIT_BODY
             "
-            label="Edit Body"
+            label="Edit body"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= EDIT_BODY"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & MANAGE_INVITES) !== MANAGE_INVITES
             "
-            label="Manage Invites"
+            label="Manage invites"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= MANAGE_INVITES"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & REMOVE_MEMBER) !== REMOVE_MEMBER
             "
-            label="Remove Member"
+            label="Remove member"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= REMOVE_MEMBER"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
               member.role === 'Owner' ||
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER
             "
-            label="Edit Member"
+            label="Edit member"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= EDIT_MEMBER"
           />
           <Checkbox
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@
               (currentMember.permissions & EDIT_MEMBER) !== EDIT_MEMBER ||
               (currentMember.permissions & DELETE_MOD) !== DELETE_MOD
             "
-            label="Delete Mod"
+            label="Delete mod"
             @input="allMembers[index].permissions ^= DELETE_MOD"
           />
         </div>
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@
             "
             @click="removeTeamMember(index)"
           >
-            Remove Member
+            Remove member
           </button>
           <button
             :disabled="
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
             "
             @click="updateTeamMember(index)"
           >
-            Save Changes
+            Save changes
           </button>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ export default {
       await this.$router.push('/dashboard/projects')
       this.$notify({
         group: 'main',
-        title: 'Action Success',
+        title: 'Action success',
         text: 'Your mod has been successfully deleted.',
         type: 'success',
       })
diff --git a/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/edit.vue b/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/edit.vue
index 2d1bf5a80..242e0fcdf 100644
--- a/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/edit.vue
+++ b/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/edit.vue
@@ -10,7 +10,8 @@
         <h3>Name</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            This is what users will see first. Will default to version number
+            This is what users will see first. If not specified, this will
+            default to the version number.
           </span>
           <input
             v-model="version.name"
@@ -21,7 +22,7 @@
         <h3>Number</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            That's how your version will appear in mod lists and in URLs
+            This is how your version will appear in mod lists and URLs.
           </span>
           <input
             v-model="version.version_number"
@@ -32,8 +33,8 @@
         <h3>Channel</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            It is important to notify players and pack makers if the version is
-            stable
+            It is important to notify players and modpack makers whether the
+            version is stable or if it's still in development.
           </span>
           <multiselect
             v-model="version.version_type"
@@ -45,11 +46,9 @@
             :allow-empty="false"
           />
         </label>
-        <h3>Loaders</h3>
+        <h3>Mod loaders</h3>
         <label>
-          <span>
-            Mark all loaders this version works with. It is essential for search
-          </span>
+          <span>Mark all mod loaders this version works with.</span>
           <multiselect
             v-model="version.loaders"
             :options="selectableLoaders"
@@ -65,12 +64,9 @@
             placeholder="Choose loaders..."
           />
         </label>
-        <h3>Game versions</h3>
+        <h3>Minecraft versions</h3>
         <label>
-          <span>
-            Mark all game version this version supports. It is essential for
-            search
-          </span>
+          <span>Mark all Minecraft versions this mod version supports.</span>
           <multiselect
             v-model="version.game_versions"
             :options="selectableVersions"
@@ -91,8 +87,8 @@
         <h3>Changelog</h3>
         <span>
           Tell players and modpack makers what's new. It supports the same
-          markdown as description, but it is advisable not to be too creative
-          with it in changelogs
+          Markdown as the description, but it is advised not to be too creative
+          with the changelogs.
         </span>
         <div class="textarea-wrapper">
           <textarea v-model="version.changelog"></textarea>
@@ -196,7 +192,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
diff --git a/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/index.vue b/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/index.vue
index c7a191fca..e7cc60c2d 100644
--- a/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/index.vue
+++ b/pages/mod/_id/version/_version/index.vue
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
       title="Are you sure you want to delete this file?"
       description="This will remove this file forever (like really forever)"
       :has-to-type="false"
-      proceed-label="Delete File"
+      proceed-label="Delete file"
       @proceed="deleteFile(popup_data)"
     />
     <ConfirmPopup
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
       title="Are you sure you want to delete this version?"
       description="This will remove this version forever (like really forever), and if some mods depends on this version, it won't work anymore."
       :has-to-type="false"
-      proceed-label="Delete Version"
+      proceed-label="Delete version"
       @proceed="deleteVersion()"
     />
     <div class="version">
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
         <div class="stat">
           <TagIcon />
           <div class="info">
-            <h4>Available For</h4>
+            <h4>Available for</h4>
             <p class="value">
               {{
                 version.game_versions ? version.game_versions.join(', ') : ''
@@ -116,10 +116,10 @@
             <p>{{ file.filename }}</p>
             <div v-if="currentMember" class="actions">
               <button @click="deleteFilePopup(file.hashes.sha1)">
-                Delete File
+                Delete file
               </button>
               <button @click="makePrimary(file.hashes.sha1)">
-                Make Primary
+                Make primary
               </button>
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
diff --git a/pages/mod/create.vue b/pages/mod/create.vue
index 64da878e4..11d135f6e 100644
--- a/pages/mod/create.vue
+++ b/pages/mod/create.vue
@@ -25,14 +25,14 @@
         <label>
           <span>
             Be creative. TechCraft v7 won't be searchable and won't be clicked
-            on
+            on.
           </span>
           <input v-model="name" type="text" placeholder="Enter the name" />
         </label>
         <h3>Summary</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            Give a quick description to your mod. It will appear in the search
+            Give a quick summary of your mod. This will appear in search.
           </span>
           <input
             v-model="description"
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
         <h3>Categories</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            Select up to 3 categories. They will help to find your mod
+            Select up to 3 categories. These will help others find your mod.
           </span>
           <multiselect
             id="categories"
@@ -65,7 +65,8 @@
         <h3>Vanity URL (slug)</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
-            Set this to something pretty, so URLs to your mod are more readable
+            Set this to something pretty, so your mod's URL can be more
+            readable.
           </span>
           <input
             id="name"
@@ -82,13 +83,13 @@
             <file-input
               accept="image/png,image/jpeg,image/gif,image/webp"
               class="choose-image"
-              prompt="Choose image or drag it here"
+              prompt="Choose an image or drag it here"
               @change="showPreviewImage"
             />
             <ul class="row-grow-1">
               <li>Must be a square</li>
               <li>Minimum size is 100x100</li>
-              <li>Acceptable formats are PNG, JPEG, GIF and WEBP</li>
+              <li>Acceptable formats are PNG, JPEG, GIF, and WEBP</li>
             </ul>
             <button
               class="transparent-button"
@@ -114,9 +115,9 @@
         <h3>Supported environments</h3>
         <div class="columns">
           <span>
-            Let others know if your mod is for clients, servers or universal.
-            For example, IC2 will be required + required, while OptiFine will be
-            required + no functionality
+            Let others know if your mod is for clients, servers, or both. For
+            example, Lithium would be optional for both sides, whereas Sodium
+            would be required on the client and unsupported on the server.
           </span>
           <div class="labeled-control">
             <h3>Client</h3>
@@ -148,22 +149,21 @@
         <h3>
           <label
             for="body"
-            title="You can type the of the long form of your description here."
+            title="You can type an extended description of your mod here."
           >
             Body
           </label>
         </h3>
         <span>
-          You can type the of the long form of your description here. This
-          editor supports markdown. You can find the syntax
+          You can type an extended description of your mod here. This editor
+          supports Markdown. Its syntax can be found
           <a
-            class=""
             href="https://guides.github.com/features/mastering-markdown/"
             target="_blank"
             rel="noopener noreferrer"
             >here</a
-          >. HTML can also be used inside your description, excluding scripts
-          and iframes.
+          >. HTML can also be used within your description, with the exception
+          of scripts and iframes.
         </span>
         <div class="columns">
           <div class="textarea-wrapper">
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
       </section>
       <section class="versions">
         <div class="title">
-          <h3>Upload Versions</h3>
+          <h3>Upload versions</h3>
           <button
             title="Add a version"
             class="button"
@@ -268,8 +268,8 @@
             <h3>Name</h3>
             <label>
               <span>
-                This is what users will see first. Will default to version
-                number
+                This is what users will see first. If not specified, this will
+                default to the version number.
               </span>
               <input
                 v-model="versions[currentVersionIndex].version_title"
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@
             <h3>Number</h3>
             <label>
               <span>
-                That's how your version will appear in mod lists and in URLs
+                This is how your version will appear in mod lists and URLs.
               </span>
               <input
                 v-model="versions[currentVersionIndex].version_number"
@@ -291,8 +291,8 @@
             <h3>Channel</h3>
             <label>
               <span>
-                It is important to notify players and pack makers if the version
-                is stable
+                It is important to notify players and modpack makers whether the
+                version is stable or if it's still in development.
               </span>
               <multiselect
                 v-model="versions[currentVersionIndex].release_channel"
@@ -304,12 +304,9 @@
                 :allow-empty="false"
               />
             </label>
-            <h3>Loaders</h3>
+            <h3>Mod loaders</h3>
             <label>
-              <span>
-                Mark all loaders this version works with. It is essential for
-                search
-              </span>
+              <span>Mark all mod loaders this version works with.</span>
               <multiselect
                 v-model="versions[currentVersionIndex].loaders"
                 :options="availableLoaders"
@@ -325,11 +322,10 @@
                 placeholder="Choose loaders..."
               />
             </label>
-            <h3>Game versions</h3>
+            <h3>Minecraft versions</h3>
             <label>
               <span>
-                Mark all game version this version supports. It is essential for
-                search
+                Mark all Minecraft versions this mod version supports.
               </span>
               <multiselect
                 v-model="versions[currentVersionIndex].game_versions"
@@ -350,7 +346,7 @@
             <label>
               <span>
                 You should upload a single JAR file. However, you are allowed to
-                upload multiple
+                upload multiple.
               </span>
               <FileInput
                 accept="application/*"
@@ -364,8 +360,8 @@
             <h3>Changelog</h3>
             <span>
               Tell players and modpack makers what's new. It supports the same
-              markdown as description, but it is advisable not to be too
-              creative with it in changelogs
+              Markdown as the description, but it is recommended not to be too
+              creative with the changelogs.
             </span>
             <div class="textarea-wrapper">
               <textarea
@@ -390,7 +386,9 @@
             placeholder="Enter a valid URL"
           />
         </label>
-        <label title="A page/repository containing the source code">
+        <label
+          title="A page/repository containing the source code for your mod."
+        >
           <span>Source code</span>
           <input
             v-model="source_url"
@@ -408,7 +406,7 @@
             placeholder="Enter a valid URL"
           />
         </label>
-        <label title="An inivitation link to your Discord server.">
+        <label title="An invitation link to your Discord server.">
           <span>Discord invite</span>
           <input
             v-model="discord_url"
@@ -424,9 +422,18 @@
         </div>
         <label>
           <span>
-            It is really important to choose a proper license for your mod. You
-            may choose one from our list or provide a URL to your own license.
-            URL field will be filled automatically for provided licenses
+            It is very important to choose a proper license for your mod. You
+            may choose one from our list or provide a URL to a custom license.
+            <br />
+            Confused? See our
+            <a
+              href="https://blog.modrinth.com/licensing-guide/"
+              target="_blank"
+              rel="noopener noreferrer"
+            >
+              licensing guide</a
+            >
+            for more information.
           </span>
           <div class="input-group">
             <Multiselect
@@ -443,6 +450,7 @@
           </div>
         </label>
       </section>
+      <!--
       <section class="donations">
         <div class="title">
           <h3>Donation links</h3>
@@ -493,6 +501,7 @@
           <hr />
         </div>
       </section>
+      -->
       <m-footer class="footer" centered />
     </div>
   </div>
@@ -673,7 +682,7 @@ export default {
 
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: description,
           type: 'error',
         })
@@ -848,10 +857,6 @@ section.game-sides {
 section.description {
   grid-area: description;
 
-  span a {
-    text-decoration: underline;
-  }
-
   & > .columns {
     align-items: stretch;
     min-height: 10rem;
@@ -1015,4 +1020,9 @@ section.donations {
 .choose-image {
   cursor: pointer;
 }
+
+a {
+  text-decoration: underline;
+  color: var(--color-link);
+}
 </style>
diff --git a/pages/mods.vue b/pages/mods.vue
index 1874864de..8b4a07a44 100644
--- a/pages/mods.vue
+++ b/pages/mods.vue
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
             </SearchFilter>
             <SearchFilter
               :active-filters="facets"
-              display-name="World Generation"
+              display-name="World generation"
               facet-name="categories:worldgen"
               @toggle="toggleFacet"
             >
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
             >
               <ServerSide />
             </SearchFilter>
-            <h3>Minecraft Versions</h3>
+            <h3>Minecraft versions</h3>
             <Checkbox
               v-model="showSnapshots"
               label="Include snapshots"
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@
               @input="reloadVersions"
             />
           </section>
-          <multiselect
+          <Multiselect
             v-model="selectedVersions"
             :options="versions"
             :loading="versions.length === 0"
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
             :hide-selected="true"
             placeholder="Choose versions..."
             @input="onSearchChange(1)"
-          ></multiselect>
+          ></Multiselect>
           <h3>Licenses</h3>
           <Multiselect
             v-model="displayLicense"
diff --git a/pages/report/create.vue b/pages/report/create.vue
index f832a30e0..3ec724523 100644
--- a/pages/report/create.vue
+++ b/pages/report/create.vue
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@
             mod would be its mod ID, found on the right side of that mod's page
             under "Project ID".
           </span>
-          <input v-model="itemId" type="text" placeholder="Enter the Item ID" />
+          <input v-model="itemId" type="text" placeholder="Enter the item ID" />
         </label>
-        <h3>Item Type</h3>
+        <h3>Item type</h3>
         <label>
-          <span> The type of the item that is being reported </span>
+          <span>The type of the item that is being reported.</span>
           <multiselect
             id="item-type"
             v-model="itemType"
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
             placeholder="Choose item type"
           />
         </label>
-        <h3>Report Type</h3>
+        <h3>Report type</h3>
         <label>
           <span>
             The type of report. This is the category that this report falls
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ export default {
       } catch (err) {
         this.$notify({
           group: 'main',
-          title: 'An Error Occurred',
+          title: 'An error occurred',
           text: err.response.data.description,
           type: 'error',
         })
diff --git a/privacy-toggles.js b/privacy-toggles.js
index 68c9282da..e5f69a345 100644
--- a/privacy-toggles.js
+++ b/privacy-toggles.js
@@ -1,18 +1,17 @@
 export default {
   settings: {
     ads: {
-      title: 'Allow personalized ads',
-      description: `Marketing/target cookies are usually used to show you advertisements that meet your interests.
-       When you visit another website, your browser's cookie is recognized and selected ads are displayed to you
-       based on the information stored in this cookie.`,
+      title: 'Personalized ads',
+      description: `Marketing and target cookies are usually used to show you advertisements that meet your interests.
+       When you visit another website, your browser's cookie is recognized and selected ads are displayed to you based
+       on the information stored in this cookie.`,
       default: true,
     },
     analytics: {
       title: 'Analytics',
-      description: `Modrinth uses in-house tools that allows us to get insights on how
-       each user is using the platform, to improve the experience for
-       everyone.\n By enabling this toggle, you allow us to get information across requests,
-       disabling it will just remove all PII from now on.`,
+      description: `Modrinth uses in-house tools that allow us to get insights into how each user is using the platform
+       in order to improve the experience for everyone.\n By enabling this toggle, you allow us to gather information
+       across requests. Disabling this toggle will simply remove all PII from now on.`,
       default: true,
     },
   },